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So different from anything else (as most of these are), which is a testament to why you should keep doing these (and I still need to start), you've so many cool ideas.
Love the character/design, and am intrigued to learn more.
And love the panel 12 quip
Like Eric, I'm left wanting something more to close the story... as it feels like it should just continue on the next page.
Regarding your comment, and Eric's and Rico's..... Perhaps an ending caption, something that signals some type of closure for this episode. I can see where the momentum of the character jumping into the mirror can indeed lead someone to want to read more, or 'turn the page' as you said.
I consider myself pretty confident in my storytelling, but I do indeed realize that if I hear similar comments about a particular panel from several sources, it's worth taking a step back and giving another look at the piece. The page has to be the strongest it can be.
Since I have yet to order a stack of this Poster Comic from my printer, I have a little time to ponder.
Thank you all for your comments, both complimentary and constructive advice.
I meant different in terms of the subject, how it can be anything... but I don't find the structure/layout/story framing to be similar between them either.
And seeing as how you Faved a Kaliman/Peso Hero drawing on your page, you probably appreciate the turban Esperanto's wearing, too!
"El que domina la mente, lo domina todo"
I should have used that line for THE COMA... [link]